Such a great first draft, ending lags a little and we need more representations so maybe the students who were in the background in the beginning can walk closer to him so he's no longer alone? Remember you need more reps.
Childhood song = Copacobana - Barry Manilow The first song I knew all the lyrics too without needing the backing track. I sang it everywhere Teen song = Everybody wants to rule the World - Tears for Fears I remember dancing to it with my mum most nights when I was younger Today song = Danger Zone - Kenny Loggins It was a song in the movie Top Gun that I watch with my Nan who lives far away whenever I see her.
Such a great first draft, ending lags a little and we need more representations so maybe the students who were in the background in the beginning can walk closer to him so he's no longer alone? Remember you need more reps.
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